寫作問題
1. 主詞交待不完整，要說明什麼樣的資料不支持convergent validity和divergent validity。
原先之寫作
Therefore, all mental scales, all general health scales, and one physical scale (i.e., the RP scale) supported the hypotheses of convergent validity. However, the RP and RE scales did not support the hypotheses of divergent validity in heroin abusers.
修改後之寫作
Therefore, the SF-36 showed good convergent validity among the mental scales and between the general health scales. However, the SF-36 represented poor divergent validity in heroin abusers.
1. 就只有這一個意見！？ if so, 那這堂課對您的幫助有限。
回覆刪除2. "among the mental scales and between the general health scales" 是指什麼？其它 scales 的 convergent validity 又如何？
3. "...the SF-36 represented poor divergent validity"
目前的語意是指 all 8 scales，這是您想表達的嗎？
1. 準備未盡詳周，收穫也較少。
回覆刪除針對2和3的部分，我會重新寫回覆內容。